What caused the Roaring Twenties to come to a grinding halt? Analyze the events of the 1920s that contributed to the demise of the American economy, using economic, social and political variables.
The essay prompt is:
What caused the Roaring Twenties to come to a grinding halt? Analyze the events of the 1920s that contributed to the demise of the American economy, using economic, social and political variables.
So for your thesis, you should be listing the 3 events that caused the "Roaring Twenties to come to a grinding halt". Then in each of the 3 body paragraphs, you analyze that particular event and how it contributed " to the demise of the American economy, using economic, social and political variables. "
From your essay so far, you have the thesis statement that lists the three events. But the body paragraphs are just completely different from the thesis statement. There was nothing about the "Jazz Age" or the "new woman" and etc like mentioned in the thesis statement, but rather it was about political unrest and farmers.
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